作业帮帮忙改英语面试材料(可以添改,其中打太极用英语怎么说)
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帮忙改英语面试材料(可以添改,其中打太极用英语怎么说)
Good moring,ladies and gentlemen!
I'm glad to be here for this interview.First,let me introduce myself.
My name is...I come from Jiao Zuo ,Henan.I have been preparing for interview a long time.Now
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you.
I dream of being an outstanding host ,director and writer.I have a lot of hobbies,such
as,singing and reading.In the spare time,i like to 打太极 which is a Chinese essence and I strongthen
my body at the same time.So I'm healthy and happy.My life motto is :where there is a will,there is a
way.My self-confidence,industry,and enthusiasm help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life.
Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself.Because,efforts are the keys to success.
Nothing is difficult,if you put your heart in to it.I feel the success is nearby.
I hope I have made a deep expression on you.That's all,thank you!
Good moring,ladies and gentlemen!
I'm glad to be here for this interview.First,let me introduce myself.
My name is...I come from Jiao Zuo ,Henan.I have been preparing for interview a long time.Now
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you.
I dream of being an outstanding host ,director and writer.I have a lot of hobbies,such
as,singing and reading.In the spare time,i like to 打太极 which is a Chinese essence and I strongthen
my body at the same time.So I'm healthy and happy.My life motto is :where there is a will,there is a
way.My self-confidence,industry,and enthusiasm help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life.
Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself.Because,efforts are the keys to success.
Nothing is difficult,if you put your heart in to it.I feel the success is nearby.
I hope I have made a deep expression on you.That's all,thank you!
1）“I have been preparing for interview a long time.Now
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you.”这句不好.你应当在这里向对方为你提供这个面试的机会表示感谢,而不是讲自己通过努力获得了机会（虽然事实是这样）,这样才能使对方觉得你有礼貌.
2）太极——一般都直接用拼音Taiji,或Taijiquan
3)你梦想成为host,表达的意思不够清楚.你面试是打算应聘旅馆管理者的位置吗?host是招待客人的主人、作东的意思,好像不应该成为梦想的内容.
4）“……help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life.”中the最好换成many,因为定冠词是特指的,让人感觉到你只克服了某些困难,这不是你想表达的意思.
5）“Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself”你怎么就知道你肯定不是优秀的?用maybe吧,不要用althogh .“ trust ”改成“ be confident of ”可能更地道些.
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you.”这句不好.你应当在这里向对方为你提供这个面试的机会表示感谢,而不是讲自己通过努力获得了机会（虽然事实是这样）,这样才能使对方觉得你有礼貌.
2）太极——一般都直接用拼音Taiji,或Taijiquan
3)你梦想成为host,表达的意思不够清楚.你面试是打算应聘旅馆管理者的位置吗?host是招待客人的主人、作东的意思,好像不应该成为梦想的内容.
4）“……help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life.”中the最好换成many,因为定冠词是特指的,让人感觉到你只克服了某些困难,这不是你想表达的意思.
5）“Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself”你怎么就知道你肯定不是优秀的?用maybe吧,不要用althogh .“ trust ”改成“ be confident of ”可能更地道些.