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求英语作文改错,As we all know,digital equipments are more and more

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求英语作文改错,
As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere which we want.
Many people own their equipments for their are convenience.We can have our own digital camera to record our happiness in our daily life.We can also use digital books in our learning.for example,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card that we can read more books which we want.We can use computer in our working day,too.It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.
But,there still exist some problems for us to do.Such as,digital equipments are usually harm to people`s eye.Some people may stay one place for a long time.All kinds of these things we can meet in our life.So ,we need have good habits to relax ourself.
As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere(everywhere - every place) which we want.
Many people own their equipments for their are(are去掉) convenience.We can have our own digital camera to record our happiness in our daily life.We can also use digital books in our learning.for example,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card(加上so) that we can read more books which we want.We can use computer in our working day,too.It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.
But,there still exist some problems for us to do.Such as,digital equipments are usually harm (harm - harmful)to people`s eye(eye - eyes).Some people may stay(加上at) one place for a long time.All kinds of these things we can meet(all kinds of these things放在这) in our life.So ,we need have good habits to relax ourself(ourself - ourselves).