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几个英语句子 帮忙看看怎么改
Replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe,i sish to apply for the position of sales managers.
I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning's journal that you are offering just the opportunity i am looking for.
Having read your advertisement in the new york times for an accountant,i thought you might be interested in my application.
亲,你是要写应聘邮件么?这语气也太不谦卑了吧...
要我写的话,我会这么写:
Dear Sir /Madam,
I write to apply for the position as Sales Manager which I found the recruitment advertisement on Boston Evening Globe. I am interested in this job and would like to consider myself a candidate for this position.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I found your recruitement advertisement on The New York Times, and I would like to apply for the position of Accountant.
再问: 这种语气是不谦卑的吗 为什么? 从哪里看的出来啊不谦卑啊?
再答: Replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe, i sish to apply for the position of sales managers.好吧,第一,人家的广告不是直接发给你吧,干嘛用reply呢?你是在杂志上面看到的广告,不好用reply吧,用了reply,而且还是这种句型,给人感觉像“勉为其难”。 I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning's journal that you are offering just the opportunity i am looking for.这一句,给我的感觉就是“看了今天早报上的招聘广告以后,我相信这个就是我要的职位”。好吧你自己琢磨琢磨吧。 Having read your advertisement in the new york times for an accountant, i thought you might be interested in my application.这一句就更嚣张了,你看了纽约时报上的招聘广告,你就知道别人会对你的申请感兴趣,太自以为是了吧?