英语翻译live in sin ten years ago on this day my heart was yearn

英语翻译
live in sin
ten years ago on this day
my heart was yearning
i promise i would never ever be returning
where my baby broke my heart and left me yearning
as we walked to the room
there were faces starring
glaring,tearing through me
someone said welcome to your doom
then they smiled with eyes
that looked as if they knew me
this is scaring me
we walked up the stairs
still concealing gloom
there were two girls
(sitting in my room)
she walked up to my face
said this is the place
you said meet you right here at noon
this is heartbreak hotel
welcome to heartbreak hotel
so this is heartbreak hotel
this place is heartbreak hotel
hope is dead
she thought that i had cheated for another lover
i turn my back to see that i am undercover
now i can't convince this girl there ain't no other
someone's evil to hurt my soul
every smile's a trial thought
in beguile to hurt me
this is scaring me
then the man next door had told
he's been here in tears for fifteen years
this is scaring me
we came to this place
where the vicious dwelt
found that wicked women
(run this strange hotel)
there was sefra and sue
every girl that i knew
and my baby said love is through
this is heartbreak hotel
welcome to heartbreak hotel
so evil
(heartbreak hotel)
this place is heartbreak hotel
someone scare my heart
(heartbreak hotel)
this is heartbreak hotel
(heartbreak hotel)
ten years ago today
(heartbreak hotel)
this is heartbreak hotel
(heartbreak hotel)
someone scare my heart
(heartbreak hotel)
this is heartbreak hotel
(heartbreak hotel)
ten years ago today
(heartbreak hotel)
hurting my mind
(heartbreak hotel)
you break my baby's heart
(heartbreak hotel)
this is heartbreak hotel
迈的this place hotel
(heartbreak hotel)
just welcome to the scene

live in sin 未婚同居（请绝对相信我这个翻译!）
ten years ago on this day 十年前的这一天
my heart was yearning 我无比渴望
i promise i would never ever be returning 我发誓我永不反悔
where my baby broke my heart and left me yearning 绝不回到我的爱人让我伤心的地方并留下我一人无尽渴望
as we walked to the room 当我们走进房间
there were faces starring
glaring,tearing through me 那里有星星形状的,耀眼的,撕裂的脸穿过我的身体
someone said welcome to your doom 有人说这就是你的末日
then they smiled with eyes 然后他们用眼睛微笑
that looked as if they knew me 似乎他们认识我
this is scaring me 这让我觉得恐怖
we walked up the stairs 我们上了楼
still concealing gloom 感觉到绝望
there were two girls 有两个女孩
(sitting in my room) （坐在我房间里）
she walked up to my face 她走到我面前
said this is the place 说,这就是
you said meet you right here at noon 你说过中午和你见面的地方
this is heartbreak hotel 这就是心碎酒店
welcome to heartbreak hotel 欢迎来到心碎酒店
so this is heartbreak hotel 心碎酒店就在你脚下
this place is heartbreak hotel 这就是心碎酒店
hope is dead 希望熄灭了
she thought that i had cheated for another lover 她想已经骗了骗过另一个情人了
i turn my back to see that i am undercover 我转过身发现我是一个地下情人
now i can't convince this girl there ain't no other 现在我不能说服自己这女孩就是她
someone's evil to hurt my soul 邪恶的人伤害了我灵魂
every smile's a trial thought 每个微笑都是试探
in beguile to hurt me 诱骗我,伤害我
this is scaring me 这让我觉得恐怖
then the man next door had told 站在门边的男人说
he's been here in tears for fifteen years 他已经在这流了15年的泪了
this is scaring me 这让我觉得恐怖
we came to this place 我们来到这
where the vicious dwelt 邪恶为首的地方
found that wicked women 找到那个邪恶的女人
(run this strange hotel) （经营起这个怪异的酒店）
there was sefra and sue 她们是sefra 和 sue
every girl that i knew 我知道的每个女孩
and my baby said love is through 我的宝贝说
this is heartbreak hotel 爱离开了心碎酒店
welcome to heartbreak hotel 欢迎来到心碎酒店
so evil 罪恶
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
this place is heartbreak hotel 这地方就是心碎酒店
someone scare my heart 有人把我心吓坏了
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
this is heartbreak hotel 这就是心碎酒店
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
ten years ago today 十年前的今天
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
this is heartbreak hotel 这就是心碎酒店
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
someone scare my heart 有人把我心吓坏了
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
this is heartbreak hotel 这就是心碎酒店
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
ten years ago today 十年前的今天
(heartbreak hotel)
hurting my mind 正在伤害我的感情
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
you break my baby's heart 你伤了我宝贝的心
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
this is heartbreak hotel 这地方就是心碎酒店
(heartbreak hotel) （心碎酒店）
just welcome to the scene 欢迎来现场
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