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My Summer Holidays
My summer holidays can be very good because I am going to back China this summer but it can be very bad because I got a cold 2 weeks.I like the summer holiday so much.I look forward to summer holiday every year.I got lot things this summer holiday and I think a lot about my self.
In this summer holidays I like shopping on the internet and I bought a lot of stuff from the internet.I bought a video card,a computer power,mouse,etc.if I want to play high performance game so I need a good video card.But why I bought a new computer power because when I putted computer power plug into socket.I forget Chinese voltage are 240V not 120V therefore my computer power is broken,that is why I need to buy a new one.
I like my cousin,my cousin only 8 years old but he knows how to play a game call Red Alert 3,Red Alert 3 is a real-time strategy game and it is one for his favorite games on the computer,I will play this game sometime.One day,I played this game with my cousin because he asked,I won my cousin lot times and he is get angry to me,he is not want talk to me all day.
I was play games along time there fore my family get angry,told me that I need to play some sports.My maternal grandmother wanted me go to swim with my cousin but I don’t like swim so I never went.I don’t go to swim but I running every night like 3 km that making my feet hurt,sometime I will take a walk.With my cousin and buy him some fool,in my city have many people will take a walk at a big soccer field every night and I like it too.
I got a very serious cold during the last month because I went to running in morning and the day is very hot 当我回家的时候吹空调.this is why my summer is both painful and joy ful.

My Summer Holidays
My summer holidays can be very good because I am going to back China,but it can be very bad because I got a cold for 2 weeks.I look forward to the summer holiday every year because I like them very much.I got a lot of things this summer holiday and I think a lot about myself.
In this summer holiday,I bought a lot of stuff from the internet including a video card,a computer power supply,a mouse,and etc.I bought the video card because I wanted to play games which require high graphics.Why I bought a new computer power supply is because I forgot that the Chinese power supplies are in 240V rather than 120V therefore my computer's power supply was broken when I inserted the plug into the socket.
I like my cousin,he is only 8 years old but he knows how to play a game called Red Alert 3 already.Red Alert 3 is a real-time strategy game and it is one of his favorite games on the computer.I too sometimes,play this game.One day,my cousin challenged me to play this game,the result turned out to be that I won my cousin so many times which caused him to get mad at me and did not talk to me for the whole day.
My family finally got mad at me cause I spent a lot of time on the computer so they told me that I need to play some sports.My maternal grandmother wanted me go to swim with my cousin but I don’t like swimming so I never went.I didn't go to swim but I ran every night for about 3 km,and that made my feet hurt.Sometime I will take a walk with my cousin and buy him some food.In the city I live,there are many people who will take a walk at a big soccer field every night and I like it too.
I got a very serious cold during the last month because I went to running in morning and it was very hot.When I returned home with air conditioning,the temperature fluctuation caused me to catch a cold.This is why my summer is both painful and joyful.
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