作业帮帮忙为四级作文评分.（会追加分数）
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帮忙为四级作文评分.（会追加分数）
career women
career women have been brought into focus.nowadays,as is described with date,in the past few decades there have arisen sharp increase in career women.in addition ,there are many women want to be career women.the reasons for this phenomenon are varied.
among all these reasons,women belif they can do well as man and always play a very important role,now is 21st century,the new seuse,new things and new women.Every woman can do what she want to do .besides,career women didn't want to a chil and didn't want get marry .therefore ,in career women's mind ,the value of work is very important than everything.
as to me ,i like career women's life,busy and happy.furthermore,i can do many things about my workan i have no time to think something troubled.in a word,without career women or career men,the best way si do everyting you want to do.
老师让我们写一篇关于career women 的文章.
什么都不限制.
我就按照王长喜12句作文法套用的写了一下.
并暗4级作文要求给个分数.
``大小写是我在打的时候没有注意.不用切换,打的比较快.
对于大家提出的语法问题.我会认真学习的.
继续.我继续期待大家的点评.
小女子先谢过各位啦.thanks
career women
career women have been brought into focus.nowadays,as is described with date,in the past few decades there have arisen sharp increase in career women.in addition ,there are many women want to be career women.the reasons for this phenomenon are varied.
among all these reasons,women belif they can do well as man and always play a very important role,now is 21st century,the new seuse,new things and new women.Every woman can do what she want to do .besides,career women didn't want to a chil and didn't want get marry .therefore ,in career women's mind ,the value of work is very important than everything.
as to me ,i like career women's life,busy and happy.furthermore,i can do many things about my workan i have no time to think something troubled.in a word,without career women or career men,the best way si do everyting you want to do.
老师让我们写一篇关于career women 的文章.
什么都不限制.
我就按照王长喜12句作文法套用的写了一下.
并暗4级作文要求给个分数.
``大小写是我在打的时候没有注意.不用切换,打的比较快.
对于大家提出的语法问题.我会认真学习的.
继续.我继续期待大家的点评.
小女子先谢过各位啦.thanks
别人都给你说了我也不想多说.我感觉不怎么样,说真的,很小儿科,感觉.最好多背诵一下范文.别光按那模式写,你别忘记了,改卷的也不是sb,他们改卷经验多了,你的套路他们能不知道吗?写的自然一些,有点自己的思路.建议你做点短问改错,经常出现的那些错误或许就有你经常不注意犯过的,你是女生,我也不想再打击你了.好好学吧!争取把低级的四级作掉.祝愿你成功.