作业帮下面的英语短文有语病吗?
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下面的英语短文有语病吗?
"The Empty Box Filled Of Kiss"
Once upn a time,a man punished his 5-year-old daughter for using up the family's only roll of expensive gold wrapping paper.Money was tight,and he became even more upset when on Christmas Eve,he saw that the child had pasted the gold paper so as to decorate a shoebox to put under the Christmas tree.
"The Empty Box Filled Of Kiss"
Once upn a time,a man punished his 5-year-old daughter for using up the family's only roll of expensive gold wrapping paper.Money was tight,and he became even more upset when on Christmas Eve,he saw that the child had pasted the gold paper so as to decorate a shoebox to put under the Christmas tree.
Once upOn a time,a man punished his 5-year-old daughter for using up the family's only roll of AN expensive goldEN wrapping paper.Money was tight,and he became even more upset when on Christmas Eve,he saw that the child had pasted(wasted) the goldEN paper (so as) to decorate a shoe-box (to put) LEFT under the Christmas tree.