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英语好的同学进来看一下这篇文章有哪些错误 为什么写一下原因.一行差不多1-2个错误

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英语好的同学进来看一下这篇文章有哪些错误 为什么写一下原因.一行差不多1-2个错误
I was only six that he held his hand
out to me.I took it and we walked.Then I
ask him,"Grandpa,how come you have
so much lines on your hands "He was silent for
a moment and said,"Each these lines stands for a
trouble in my life."I looked at his other hands."But
what do you have more lines on that one?" "Because
there are more the honors and joys in my life."
that→when when引导时间状语从句
it后面少了in mine(应该是你少打进去In me吧,这篇应该是高中短文改错,貌似很像某年的高考原题) 表示我握住了他的手,握手得两只收,所以用mine=my hand
ask→asked 整片文章都在叙述过去,所以要用过去时态
much→many lines为不可数名词复数,要用many.much修饰不可数
each后加of each不能单独加名词复数或代词
hands改为hand 人就两手,看完了一只就剩一只了
what改为why 这里应该是表示疑问的
去掉the honors and joys前面已经有more修饰了